In an Anne Fadiman essay, you get (1) a perfect title, (2) an arresting intro, and (3) details. I'll show you what I mean. Fadiman wrote about switching to Zoom for class instruction during Covid, and she called the essay "Screen Share." It's an essay about sharing one's screen--but it's also an act of sharing- about- screens. Perfect title. To write about oneself, one must be able to *mock* oneself. Fadiman demonstrates this with her intro: ON THE FOURTH day of spring break, our university’s president announces that no one is to return to campus. Two cases of Covid-19 have been reported in our state. All classes will be moving online. Soon afterward, the members of the humanities faculty receive an email from our dean telling us that “the development of a quality online course takes at least two years.” We have 12 days. I feel like a runner with decent times in the 800 meters whose coach says, You still get to go to the track meet, but we’ve switched you ...
The thing that makes Michael Connelly special is his interest in "the real world." Before switching to fiction, Connelly was s journalist; his novels continue to show his fascination with choices that actual people make within an actual flawed system. For example, in one of the "Bosch" novels, a major clue involves the misuse of municipal property. A night stalker is tampering with various street lights--to make his "project" easier. In another novel, there is a brief interlude that is centered on victims and names. Some cops are using a victim's real name, whereas others are using a racist nickname--"Burrito Girl" (or something like this). The detail seems ripped from the headlines--and it makes a world of difference. People reveal themselves through (allegedly) small choices. "The Lincoln Lawyer" series nicely blends Connelly's knowledge with David E. Kelley's knowledge. Like Connelly, David E. Kelley did challenging wor...